........short poetry, short stories, short quotes and such.

Sunday, February 15, 2009

My Sunday Offering (a cinqku)


image found here


His gift
outshining
any other,
tenderly folded in
crimson.

5 comments:

Dave King said...

Your Cinqku is lovely, as is the verse.

PinkLady said...

susan, this one's lovely as always. your expertly worded cinqku was a perfect match to that beautiful image.

you are so talented. thank you for sharing your gift with us.

much love,

bing (",)

SUSAN SONNEN said...

Bing and Dave, I thank you.
Cinqkus are quite fun to write. I do not write much religious poetry, but when I do it is much easier for me to right it in form.

SweetPeaSurry said...

I do like the Cinqku. (suprisingly I'd never heard of that before. I'm out of touch apparently!)

Lovely image as well.

bright blessings!

SUSAN SONNEN said...

Thank you, Surry. It's one of those newfangled hybrid-type forms. :)